line 39 - please break down run on sentence into 2 setnences.
similarly line 41 needs rewriting for clarity and flow
line 45 - comma after cheap - and consider the term inexpensive in its place.
line 69 - grabbed ->captured
line 94 were ->was
line 120 figure 1de.. if both, pelase use comma.
line 176 an LED
line 256, please break apart run-on sentence.
line 265, subject verb agreement / clarity
Reviewer 2 (part 6 of 6)
> minor:
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> line 28. sophisticated. In contrast...
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> line 39 - please break down run on sentence into 2 setnences.
> similarly line 41 needs rewriting for clarity and flow
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> line 45 - comma after cheap - and consider the term inexpensive in its place.
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> line 69 - grabbed ->captured
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> line 94 were ->was
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> line 120 figure 1de.. if both, pelase use comma.
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> line 176 an LED
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> line 256, please break apart run-on sentence.
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> line 265, subject verb agreement / clarity
Keisuke Sehara
Reviewer 2 (part 6 of 6)
actually I have fixed them already